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« : Styczeń 12, 2009, 20:38:55 »

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School uniforms are common in primary and secondary school In many nations. Wearing uniforms at school usually joins with tradition. School uniforms are popular in the United Kingdom and Ireland. In many countries uniforms are obligatory, mainly in Australia, Malaysia, Japan. In Poland in 2006 minister education R.G restore school uniform, but in 2008 school uniforms were removed.
It is true that there are a number of advantages to wearing uniforms at school. One, wearing uniforms at school have on aim removal difference between rich and poor students, because many students don’t have a money to buy trendy clothes. And, helps identify intrudes in the school, so students are safer, because, they don’t be subject on persons’ influence from outside. In addition students concentrate better, because they don’t look, how different wear. Furthermore, uniforms cover student’s clothes, so clothes don’t get dirty. Finally school uniforms are practical, so student don’t have wonder, what put.
But, there are a number of disadvantages. To begin, students wearing uniform at school and uniforms are useless outside the school. And, when we tell students wear uniforms, we limit their personality and limit freedom of expression. Students haven’t possibility off went in this what it likes. Students must wear this what it doesn’t like. In addition when we tell students wear uniforms we kill their individualism, because everyone student are different. Finally, the purchase of uniform is the additional, because students have buy  a books, notebook etc. and for a many students buy uniform a problem, because their don’t have a money.
 In conclusion, I believe that even if wearing uniforms at school has some advantages, the disadvantages outweigh them. In my opinion wearing uniforms at school isn’t good idea, because breaks then development of the students personality and isn’t needed.
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« Odpowiedz #1 : Styczeń 13, 2009, 17:44:05 »

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School uniforms are common in primary and secondary school in many nations. Wearing uniforms at school is usually a tradition. School uniforms are popular in the United Kingdom and Ireland. In many countries uniforms are obligatory, mainly in Australia, Malaysia, and Japan. In Poland in 2006 minister of education R.G. restored school uniform, but in 2008 idea was abandoned.
It is true that there are a number of advantages when it comes to wearing uniforms at school. One, wearing uniforms at school have removed difference between rich and poor students, because many students don’t have a money to buy trendy clothes. And, helps identify intrudes inside the school, so students are safer.  It also helps students to concentrate better, because they don’t worry about what they wear. Furthermore, uniforms cover student’s clothes, so clothes don’t get dirty. Finally school uniforms are practical because student don’t have wonder, what put on.
But, there are a number of disadvantages. To begin, students wear uniform at school but uniforms are useless outside the school. When we tell students to wear uniforms, we limit their creativity and their freedom of expression. Students don’t have possibility of wearing what they like. In addition when we ask students to wear uniforms we kill their individualism, because every student wants to different. Finally, the purchase of uniform is the additional cost, students already have spend money on books and other school supplies. For many buying a uniform is a financial problem.
In conclusion, I believe that even if wearing uniforms at school has some advantages, the disadvantages overshadow them. I think wearing uniforms at school isn’t a good idea, because it breaks the development of the student personality.
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